New song & video! Feedback needed please!

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    Hello all, i'm a singer/songwriter from Northern Ireland and just wanted to share with you a new tune i put together a few weeks ago called Tonight.
    I was lucky enough to be invited over to perform in Nashville USA at the famous Bluebird Cafe back in June and it was that trip that inspired me to write this song.
    Its a pretty chilled out tune with a summery feel to it.
    Check it out below if you have a spare moment for new music.
    All feedback welcome :)

    Cheers
    Chris

    http://www.chriskeys.com/
    https://www.facebook.com/chriskeysofficial

    Chris Keys - Tonight (Live)

     
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    You got talent.And this song is verry good.It works well with a big fat joint xD
    Keep up with the good work!Cheers!
     
    Alin Alex, Aug 13, 2013 IP
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    : ))) Nice one, good to hear you enjoyed!! Thanks for letting me know.
     
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    Anyone else got feedback for me? :) trying to improve in anyway i can!!

    Chris
     
    Muso1070, Aug 18, 2013 IP
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    #5
    i listen it amazing creative different music tune
     
    juliten, Aug 19, 2013 IP
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    #6
    very well sung!.. keep it up dude!
     
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    Thanks Juliten :)
     
    Muso1070, Aug 20, 2013 IP
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    Cheers Sourajit, glad you enjoyed buddy :)
     
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    Any one else got any constructive criticism for me? Im trying to improve my music video making skill and your thoughts are appreciated.

    Thanks
     
    Muso1070, Aug 24, 2013 IP
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    I was kinda thinking the song is to long?
    And maybe the lighting is to much making unwanted shadows?
    Also is it just me or does the video look a little squeezed or something?
    These are only small issues of course.
     
    Muso1070, Aug 28, 2013 IP
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    Hii,

    Great song. I enjoyed it. Keep it up :)
     
    Yapsody, Aug 29, 2013 IP
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    Thanks buddy, i appreciate that :)
     
    Muso1070, Sep 3, 2013 IP
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    Beautiful! You just made one more fan! Way to go....All the best...
     
    crazy4warez, Sep 11, 2013 IP
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    Nice one, glad to hear you enjoyed :)
    Thanks
     
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    For anyone who enjoyed the song here are the lyrics :)

    Tonight by Chris Keys

    V.1 When will you see
    what you mean to me
    listen to your heart
    and walk on out, from the dark.
    HHHHHHHMMMMM -----------
    what must i do
    to make it clear to you
    love is all we need
    so please oh please, wait for me.

    C.1 And the day will turn into the night
    with you by my side to hold
    and the moon beams down
    over our little town
    it feels so right, tonight ----------
    Oh -- Oh ---------- Oh -- Oh ------------ Oh -- Oh

    V.2 How can i try
    to keep you on my side
    believe in all you dream
    and meet me somewhere in between.
    HHHHHHHMMMMM -----------
    One of these days
    we might find our way
    two lost and lonely minds
    oh please oh please, oh be mine.

    C.2 Repeat C.1 with 4th line:
    It shines so bright, tonight -----------
    Oh -- Oh ---------- Oh -- Oh ------------ Oh -- Oh
    2x Oh -- Oh ---------- Oh -- Oh ------------ Oh -- Oh
     
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    #16
    You got talent! Great song, well written.

    I like it better if i don't watch the video, just have it on in the background. I like the cuts in the video to you playing the guitar with no singing. Not sure what it is but i think you touched upon it, lighting/shadowing. - Minor things though!
     
    Dale2004, Sep 13, 2013 IP
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    Thanks buddy, glad to hear you liked it! means alot :)
     
    Muso1070, Sep 17, 2013 IP
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    #18
    great nice music...love it..love the song too..
     
    kimvar, Sep 18, 2013 IP
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    One of my favor thing is music, and I love music that brings emotion. Frankly, you song is beautiful!!!! keep up the good work! Can't wait for your new album!
     
    sery kouma kone, Sep 18, 2013 IP
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    Hey thanks for letting me know!! :)
     
    Muso1070, Sep 25, 2013 IP