NEW Sales Copy... What Are Your Thoughts? Please advice :)

Discussion in 'Reviews' started by Valeriu Popescu, Mar 12, 2009.

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    Hello folks...

    I've just launched my new book, and although I thought the copy is
    somehow good :D, I'd like to know your opinion and how to improve it!

    Here are some things I am looking for:

    - I don't like too much the headline, need to come up
    with another one. Any suggestion?

    - The sales is way too long?

    - Do you think the $ 77 price is right?

    - The guarantee: should I increase it to 365 days?

    Here's the link:

    http://www.web2jointventuresecrets.com

    Any critique or advise would be greatly appreciated.

    Thanks in advance! :):):)

    Val
     
    Valeriu Popescu, Mar 12, 2009 IP
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    2advance Well-Known Member

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    You are right !.. The price is too high and also the designs are not so good. Try with some other..
     
    2advance, Mar 12, 2009 IP