New Prison-Style Browser Based Free MMORPG Game Asking For Reviews

Discussion in 'Reviews' started by TheMostCreative, Jan 15, 2014.

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    I recently started my own free MMORPG browser based games and would like to get your feedback .
    The game is all about prison-style.

    Have a look: prisonsteam. com
     
    TheMostCreative, Jan 15, 2014 IP
  2. wco

    wco Well-Known Member

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    Hello, and thank you for taking the time to share your new website and game with us!

    Here's the deal, and this is coming from someone who happens to be a fan of MMORPG games and have some extensive experience both playing, as well as supporting the development of such.

    The website and layout are, in my opinion, definitely middling--considering the level of dedication and actual platform applied here, but should be appreciated as a good core foundation to draw prospective users/gamers in with. (Please understand, and I'm sure you appreciate this as being a member of DP for a few years now and imaginably being in the business already on some level or another, that this is a process, a machine of sort, that will require extensive time, hard-work, dedication, and ideally teamwork--though that ultimately of course being your decision.)

    However, beyond the attractive color scheme, imagery, and website design; the first thing that came to my attention on your home-page were the typos on the welcome-screen. Please don't take this as me being unreasonably critical or harsh, I just want to see your game and business become a success! With that being said, have you considered sharing some screenshots (on or around the home-page) to demonstrate to players the game-play, or in other words what they are going to experience from the game? Do you see yourself ultimately charging for membership in the long-run? In other words, how will you maintain and afford the maintenance costs, etc. and then ultimately profit ? Forgive me, but my level of comfort in actually registering/running any type of direct Java or Flash driven and hosted apps or software on my computer via a foreign website or platform to me is minimal at this time--but this is not to say that in the future should we continue corresponding this always be the case.

    On a side note, isn't the primary picture you are using for your game-site logo/image a Copyrighted image from the TV Series Jailbreak? I have no realistic interest or benefit from reporting you for it, regardless of if you were required or are permitted to use it by law. I'm just trying to be helpful in pointing it out, and ensure you don't get caught up in legal issues before you even get the game and site moving--as per my previous comments, it definitely has my attention and I'm interested. It also (per your website stat-display) indicates that there are in fact active users or have been in the past 24-hours. Was this indicator set and representing it's default settings, or is it in fact already live and hosted?

    In the mean time, I hope you will appreciate my visual review and critique on your new site and game-based platform in which you're considering 'lifting off' or marketing. Perhaps we can correspond more in the near-future regarding the visualization variables within both your site and game, as well as the coding in which you're going to be using, hosting strategies, input/output for you, etc. All the best. William
     
    wco, Jan 16, 2014 IP
  3. TheMostCreative

    TheMostCreative Well-Known Member

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    Thank youfor the long detailed review, if you could pm me with what can we improve i'll really appreciate it.
    Also the design is temp, I'm getting a new one.
     
    TheMostCreative, Jan 17, 2014 IP