New Home Business Website

Discussion in 'Websites' started by MrLeN, Feb 21, 2013.

  1. #1
    I finished making this website yesterday.

    I would like a review -- specifically, if you were trying to decide on whether you wanted to join this business, what would turn you off?

    Is there anything glaring on the website, that I may have overlooked, that would cause you not to join the business?

    http://biz.triorbit.com
     
    MrLeN, Feb 21, 2013 IP
  2. jacksarlo

    jacksarlo Well-Known Member

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    the url: on a subdomain.
    The site does not load hehe.
     
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    diggs11 Active Member

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    Your website needs a attraction like add some features benefits of your website membership add clients reviews i hope you will get a memberships as well as.
    must be on homepage

    this answer will help you.
     
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  4. MrLeN

    MrLeN Well-Known Member

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    What's wrong with a subdomain?
     
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    Wizza Well-Known Member

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    In all honesty it's minimalistic and I like that. Loads quickly but I don't like the logo. I also think that the way the information on the homepage is it feels like a scam or a triangle scheme. Maybe add a bit more info on how it works or what it entails on the homepage.

    Hope this helps
     
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  6. MrLeN

    MrLeN Well-Known Member

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    Hmm, well it is not a pyramid scheme. It is only a 1 tier referral system. How do you recommend that I change the content? What about the homepage makes it seem like a scam?
     
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    Wizza Well-Known Member

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    I know it's not a triangle scheme but at first glimpse that's how I felt. I think what makes it feel like a scam is the lack of detail about what the actual website is on the homepage. Instead all I keep seeing is how I can earn lots of money - but that doesn't make me want to sign up. I would prefer to have some solid info on the homepage about how I can earn money and how your website will do this instead of having to go to the how it works page. The how it work page should go in to more detail once you have got my attention.
     
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  8. MrLeN

    MrLeN Well-Known Member

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    oh, okies.. good point. I will revise the front page and try to be a little more specific.
     
    MrLeN, Feb 22, 2013 IP
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    MrLeN Well-Known Member

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    Ok, how about now? I added a new paragraph called: "How do you make money?".

    I also updated the "benefits".
     
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    That's a lot better. Clear and easy to understand.
     
    Wizza, Feb 23, 2013 IP
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  12. jacksarlo

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    Being professional, if you have done niche marketing well enough to know the niche area you're working is almost a guarantee it will be a success it will be wise to get a domain name of your own.

    If you're not sure whether what you're doing is going to be successful or not, meaning you're trying things out, testing, etc then subdomain is ok.
     
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  13. MrLeN

    MrLeN Well-Known Member

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    Well, I own triorbit.com - I am a domain reseller.

    Not spamming, but I just wanna say that I have good rankings with other triorbit.com subdomains.

    ie: Google..

    "youtube subscribers" 60,000 global month searches (Google)
    "youtube subs" 22,000 global month searches (Google)
    ..and a heap more.

    You will see subs.triorbit.com is in the top #10, and it currently gets 6,000 visitors a day.

    Just sayin'..

    What about Google and Yahoo and the big properties? 95% of their stuff is on subdomains. I personally think subdomains are fine, just as long as you actually own the TLD.
     
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    You can test it sure... I didn't know triorbit.com was your domain but it's an advantage to drive visitors to: google.com versus search.google.com

    The homepage: http://triorbit.com/ has got nothing to do with the subdomain, it's not part of it so it's unrelated. It will be much better to move everything to http://triorbit.com for promotional reasons & professional reasons you promote a domain name: triorbit.com

    At first I thought your site was hosted on a free hosting provider, sure not everyone will think that. These are just my thoughts and opinions of course :) You're the boss then :).
     
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    MrLeN Well-Known Member

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    I have a lot of different TriOrbit sub domains. I will eventually make some kind of portal from the main triorbit.com domain. I agree with you there.
     
    MrLeN, Feb 23, 2013 IP