new header - pls. review

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    cri8bat, Sep 12, 2009 IP
  2. RobertK

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    Hi cri8bat,

    It's ok - but the PNG image seems to be too low quality - as it is part photograph save it either as jpeg or higher quality PNG (I think you've used png-8 here).

    Also the stroke around the writing at the bottom makes the writing a little difficult to read.

    Hope this helps
     
    RobertK, Sep 14, 2009 IP
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    I agree with robertK but also you should increase the text size a little more and add less of a outline, also the papers to the right seem like quite a lot (of papers) that might put people of a bit, maybe if you put a pic of just a few pieces of papers it would look more appealing. just a thought. hope the info helps :).
     
    Adamakro, Sep 14, 2009 IP
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    Try using the deep blue (box colours) on your main text and put C.V on the same line as the rest, i agree background image looks pixelated, i think if you moved the C.V up inline your slogan/small text could then be enlarged and go along the bottom of the banner, maybe use a darker colour for the text or stroke.
     
    Photoshop_Designer, Sep 14, 2009 IP
  5. cri8bat

    cri8bat Well-Known Member

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    thank you guys, for your comments

    I took yours advice and darken and sharpen the images even more

    pls. kindly re-review :)

    thank you
     
    cri8bat, Sep 15, 2009 IP
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    The "How to Write" and "CV" text needs to be much closer together. And wouldn't it be more proper to say "How to Write A CV"?

    The images are good though...I think it works.
     
    Norebbo, Sep 15, 2009 IP
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    Blue on blue is a bit too much, can you make one of the blues slightly different, them you wont need such a thick stroke around the text
     
    Drdrip, Sep 17, 2009 IP
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    First thing you should make sure is that your gramaticaly correct in your header. Meaning it should say "How to write a CV" not just "How to write CV" Also imo the light blue on light blue is almost hard to read. As far as the text of the header. And the smaller text that begins with online guide is hard to read to me too. Thats just small little color details im sure youll get it looking good soon, site itself looks good.
     
    misterliquidcity, Sep 18, 2009 IP