Hey there I would love some advice on what you think about my sales page and affiliate page. The sales page is http://www.blog2success.co.uk Affiliate page is http://www.blog2success.co.uk/affiliate.html
Hi, My 2c as I read through it. Please don't take them too harshly, you asked for advice and here it is - The comma in the headline breaks up the flow of the text when you're reading it. - Why would you put reviews in a video and make me keep pressing pause to read them? I didn't watch it and I doubt many other people will too. You're putting an unnecessary hurdle between your prospects and the social proof that might tip them over the edge into buying! - Where is the proof that you know what you're talking about (ie, the proof that you've made money from blogging)? This would also serve as a demonstration of how much money I can make (which you don't mention anywhere that I can see) - If blogging is so easy and lucrative, why are you also including "other ways to make money"? This makes me doubt your product. - Your email opt-in box is pretty vague... updates to what? - One of the biggest bloggers on the internet called you on the phone and told you your guide was awesome? Who is he, what are his sites, how much is he making etc etc. You need to back up claims like this.
well your site can have a bad experience if you dont act now.dont advertise it at all until you improve somethings.first i say somethings mentioned in the above post -comma is just a small thing doesnt matter as compared to the other flaws -The video is all right but dont put it in the middle of the page.put a small speaker button which only emits audio and not video or show a video which is longer than what you are showing and self made and not from youtube -I think you are a newbie and have not yet known how to attract customers.you have taken the idea of long sales page which convert well but you have not created it well.to be very honest its bad. Before i proceed i would like to pause for a moment.the two consecutive posts which you are reading may have discouraged you and you might be feeling a liitle bad.but freind i dont want to give wrong advice.you should act immediately and change some things. now i proceed. -There is no thing like testimonials or advantages and proof of your earnings.moreover you should have shown them there is refund also. moreover what a long sales page does is emotionally connect with someone who wants to buy your product.you are not doing that and put your rss feed and subscribe icon in the right not in between the page. it will be better if you search succesful long page sites which work and learn from them.if this niche has a good competetion you will need a better sales page for that i hope you take my advice and best of luck
This is the reason why I ask you guys, I have been blogging for years and doing internet marketing BUT I have not got a clue about sales pages and "selling to the customer". I have not showed proof that it makes money, because I was heading towards a blogging guide that teaches you how to create a blog, monetize it and promote it on the internet and I didnt want it to come across as a another get rich quick sceme! I do not take offense at all at your comments they are brilliant, now I know some of the mistakes I will work on correcting them. First of all the video, I did create it myself but uploaded it to youtube so it gets exposed to youtube as well! Near the bottom of the page I do offer a full money back gaurantee!! (Now I am going to mention it further up as well) Also the other ways to make money online is, I am just sharing a few differnet methods on how to make money online as well as the blog (I can see where your coming from I will delete it) Also I had a list of reviews flowing down the page but there was about 15 and it made the sales page even longer, shall I keep the video and sort it out proplery or shall I add the seperate reviews! Thanks for the tips guys! keep them coming!
Let's just be clear, the headline is one of the MOST important elements on the page. Every single character, punctuation mark, capital letter, word, styling and even the number of words per line matters. If there's punctuation in there that spoils the flow of the headline when you read it, the message and the impact of the words could be lost. But I agree, there are other problems that need sorting more urgently. You have to back up your claims. If you don't want to be "get rich quick", don't claim that people will make $10k in 2 weeks. Without proof what you're selling is just your opinion, and that's much harder to sell. With proof, you're selling a "system" that is proven to work - which is what people want to buy. Personally, I'd put stuff like written testimonials into the sales page as text so they can be read, quickly. They are a powerful proof element so you need to stick them visibly in front of people who skim through the site without really reading. Someone who skims over it now will see a black box and ignore it.
its good that you have taken this positively. now as i have said you need to get an idea as to what a good long sales page requires.as i said these advices wont give you a better idea than looking for long sales page sites.stop working on your site for 1 month and calmly try and understand what the succesful long sales page sites have.as for the immediate actions sales page are vey very very long(you get a good idea when you look it for yourself). if it is difficult for you to find such sites then here is the golden format of how long sales page sites are written www.clickhereyouidiot.com
Thanks for you comments I am going to get rid of the video and add the written reviews thanks for the advice, and your saying I need proof that the guide is what I am saying it is - that is why I have added the reviews that people have left after reading the guide I am selling! I have not stated anywhere that you can earn $10k in 2 weeks. I have just stated that blogs make money! Thanks for your tips any more would be brilliant!
well i would reccomend not to remove the video.i mean remove the youtube one but upload a self made one.nowdays video is becoming popular,atractive and important.will be better if you remove it now make the major changes and then pm me of the video.
Right people, I have kept the video but altered each review with a time, so you dont have to pause it lol. and made all the changes! Any more tips I would be greatful! thanks again
i think the gold coins you use are corny and outdated looking. I'm sure you can find nicer images than that.... It's all about the wads of cash these days, gold coins are primal!
The subheadings between the text copy seems a little dark, I was tempted to just skip over the subheadings and got straight to the next paragraph. Just my 2cents though : ) Also, if you are a rockstar with blogging and IM but not so much with sales copy why don't you outsource just that bit to a professional. I usually just do that and for decent prices to.
I am not that type of person, I like doing things myself so then if it takes off I know I done it all off my own back! (Except with help from you guys ) also the sub headings I can see what you mean I change them!