Here is my first approved clickbank product: http://webmastertoolpack.com What do you guys think in terms of design & just the product in general? & if you like, maybe you could push it ^^; it has 75% commissions, i'm not sure on how much that would be on $45. Do you think this product could be successful? I'd love to hear your thoughts, thanks in advance.
It's all one picture? Oh, dear. The textless page make it almost impossible to get AdWords traffic. Also, a slow internet connection kills this website because the user just sees a white or blue page. This product can be successful if marketed well, but this image only design makes it very hard to market. Good luck, nadavs
the design isnt bad... get rid of the horizontal scroll bars your purchase link should go to: www.yourdomain.com/order.php then redirect to the payment link use a description in your cb pay link so the product details appear on the cb order page rather then "purchase" maybe use the word "join" or "become a member" state that its a one time fee.. no on-going costs you can also test a 2 page order.. on the 2nd page have a summary of what they get and try for an upsell
I think you have some very strong design elements and this can be an awesome sales page with a few minor tweaks. I would change the background so that is is less busy-looking (I'd recommend a smoother gray with a possible slight shading gradient from dark to light (or vice versa) instead of the busy horizonal text. In the header text gradient, I'd set the gradient angle to 270 degrees instead of vertical, and I'd make the seal on the top right compliment the web 2.0'ish lime green color by making the seal more orange and also a bit darker/deeper of a color, while keeping the nice subtle gradient. I wouldn't reuse the exact same seal for the price on the bottom of the page, because it makes it look like the website is repeating itself. The icons you use are excellent (A++++) because consumers are highly visual and trust sites with friendly (often large), highly polished icons. For each of the features of the tool-pack, I'd make sure not only to talk about the features, but also the benefits (sell the sizzle, not just the steak). For example, on the "GOOGLE BANNED CHECK" you write "Check your site in Google's listing to make sure it isn't banned from their index. $15 value", You need to spice that feature up because to me it sounds like you just do a quick google search on the domain which is far less than $15 of work. Instead, I'd describe this feature with more excitement and instill a sense of direct benefit by saying "Ensure your site maximizes its exposure by verifying its availability to potential customers who search through Google". This is wordier, but sounds much more enticing because it mentions a specific benefit your own customers will care about, and sounds less like something they can simply do on their own. Like NaDav mentioned, break-down the graphic into multiple graphics, and I'd also see about making more of the graphic text based to reduce loading time. Remember that some of your customers are still using good ole' dial-up and won't wait 1 minute to load your pitch.
I think this could easily be a sell-able product. The desing of the page is good, but like the others have said, you need to re-do it with text, and not just one giant image. Otherwise your quality score with google will be crap, and no one will promote it. But the one thing that I really love is the giant purchase button at the bottom. I don't think I've seen one like that on a website before, and I'm tempted to try one like that myself on my next product. There's definitely no doubt where you need to go to make the purchase - and probably helps the conversions quite a bit. I could be wrong though - but I think it looks cool.
Alfred, I do agree with everybody regarding modifications to the page. The Design looks phenomenal, just needs some text for SEO per Swerd's advice. Are you going to be making any viral videos to demonstrate the product? Tom
Probably won't be doing that, i'm not sure how i'd illustrate php scripts, yah know? Thanks guys though, i'll be coding this soon, also, any with other suggestions, i'm always happy to hear your thoughts ^^.
The scrolling is annoying but the page layout/picture works. I would suggest changing yellows to orange and greens to blue ... research indicates better conversions on sales pages and I have noticed these colors help. Good luck.
I like the design -- except the text backgrounds -- which are a bit too busy for my taste. You could maybe leave them in with less repeat or fade them out. Good luck -- you are off to a great start!