Hey gang, I'd love to get your thoughts on a new product I'm getting ready to launch. This is my first clickbank product, and I'm very excited about it's potential because it's not just another ebook, so it stands out from most of the other clickbank products. Here's the link: yourgamewebsite.com Any feedback you can give would be appreciated! Thanks!
Nice idea, you should have some kind of demo so the users can see what they are going to actually get based on what package they choose
Thanks, I added demo information to the page. Clickbank just approved it, too, so it's now live! Keep the feedback and suggestions coming, though!
Get a web designer to make a decent looking page, it looks horrible as is. Sample sites would also be a good idea. Get rid of your adsense ads on the site, no self respecting affiliate is going to send you traffic so that you can earn adsense clicks. Get rid of hosting affiliate links, again no affiliate with any brain is going to send you traffic just so you can make money of their work without the affiliate getting credit.
^ oh.... but... but.. I tot I wuz going to outsmartz all u gaiyz and bank from yur efforts... Damn straight mate, if you're entering this game, treat your affiliates like gold not like shit. They will make or break your program.
I've read the site over a few times, and I'm still not 100% sure what it really is. If there's no forum or blog with which to enter some content, then you must be offering some sort of blank-page hosting? No editor? I think you need to do a better job at differentiating what is included with the one-time investment and the monthly billing. These really need to be side-by-side for logic's sake. You state that in the Pro option there's monthly fees for hosting. There's no hosting for the cheaper one? The Pro option needs hosting because of the AdSense? Also, your 'as seen on' and credit card images are super-fuzzy because they're JPGs, and should be GIFs. John
The overall concept is good, I like it, however you really need to work on your sales page. Make it flow better, make a better overall layout, put some more graphics, the letter itself needs work. Also, drop the adsense ads and the hostgator affiliate links. Affiliates won't send traffic to someone who has affiliate links all over the place.
Thanks for all of the input guys, I really do appreciate it. The adsense ads were there because I was basically building the demo site around the sales page. That's on my list of things to change this weekend. Keep the advice coming, it's very helpful! I'm a total newbie to clickbank, but I have a thick skin and won't get offended from some good honest criticism. Thanks!