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Yes, there is a problem with your banner. Anyways, I think you shouldn't make it so that potential customers have to opt-in before they can order. Noone (or atleast very few) people will want to go through all those efforts of promotion to just end up giving you free leads to your list..
Dude you need to fix your header or no one will buy. Also I do not know enough about the products to even consider giving you my email address. Good Luck
hi everyone thanks for letting me know and now its fixed ps: who thinks i should take my opt-in box out and who thinks i should keep it? thanks
What he said. Your sales letter leaves alot to be desired. The font of the first bullet point is different to the other bullet points. I'd assume they'd all have the same font. There are some unnecessary question marks and other punctuation. Example: "Learn search engine optimization The Easy Way?" * Just like in most other parts of your sales letter, you're missing some full stops. * You're also putting capitals at the start of the words, where they aren't needed Also, you need to tell people more about your system, what exactly does it involve? I know it says "New YouTube Traffic Unleashed" in the header, but your website is called "work-athome-biz.com" - What does that have to do with YouTube marketing? Also, you need to tell people more about your method. How will you be using YouTube to generate traffic? I'm not saying give your method away, just tell people a little bit more about your method to see if it's right for them. Also, what exactly does your eBook help with? Getting more YouTube views, subscribers, channel views, favourites, or video comments? Or just the whole lot? Or maybe just video views? Ok, what does that have to do with YouTube marketing? You need to rephrase your sentences to involve YouTube. Your being way too broad with your questions. Some other bullet points you could use: * How to make money promoting CPA offers on YouTube * How to bring in laser targetted traffic to your site with ONE simple video Ok, I'm not the sales type of person, but you get my point. I'm just saying that there's alot of work that needs to be done on the letter. My advice: * Get a new YouTube related domain - The domain is unprofessional (the dashes), will most likely not rank in SE's due to competition (unless you're promoting through Adwords). You might be able to rank for home biz long tail keywords, but I doubt that would bring in too many sales, and there will probably be alot of other people going for those home biz long tail keywords. * Rephrase and re-do the letter. For example, with the "Dear Internet Entrepreneur", you could put "Dear Frustrated YouTube Marketer" or something like that. Same with the rest of the letter, try to format it to sell to YouTube marketers. * If you want to give a bonus, give something related to YouTube marketing. Maybe something like "You could be generating thousands of visits from YouTube, but you're doing ONE thing WRONG!" - and you could just quickly detail a common mistake that people make with YouTube marketing that's causing them to lose traffic. Hopefully it helps.