I have just launched a new product TajCosmetics.com it consists of complete herbal and natural recipes for beauty cosmetics, skin care, hair care and natural remedies to almost all chronic problems..... + and - feedbacks are welcome........ http://www.TajCosmetics.com
The book image at the bottom of the sales page looks a little dark. Have some light shining on it or lighten it up so it's better visible. That's what is being sold, isn't it? I like the page though the background images could take some time to load on slower connections. BTW: The book image says $127 / The order page shows $47. Please change that.
I wanted to imply that the original price was $127 by showing an image proof and the offer price is $47. Is this a good idea or should i change it as u said......
Very few books I've seen (or bought) cost $127, so you get the hint Best to put $127 crossed-out on the sales page than on the book. The book should say $47 (the price it really is). Just my opinion.
Just 2 more things... You need to emphasize that your product is a book and NOT a physically delivered cosmetics kit. Anyone who comes to your site might mistake it for a ready-to-use cosmetics kit. Like when you say 'Taj Cosmetics' the assumption is of a physical product. Emphasize the book part more clearly. Also on your website, you've written: That's 2 AM in the night (early morning). Small mistake, but counts ...
Very good looking site, with a very nice looking product. It should do well if promoted properly. One small note: the earnings per sale are $31.85, and not $35. There are some ClickBank fees to consider (calculated like that: ($47 * 0.925 - 1) * 0.75). Consider updating the affiliates page to avoid confusion and disappointment by affiliates. Good luck! nadavs
From your website one can not get a good idea of your product. You should give away some sample free chapters to create more interest in your product. Taj cosmetics costs $127 out in stores. Is it really available?? People can find it out easily and you will lose your credibility.
thanks sikandar... its completely beauty care and remedies to any chronic problems...... its like a combination of contents of many niches in health and fitness.... how exactly can we promote such a thing....... is it good idea to display the screenshot of table of contents of the book
As someone who actively promotes natural skin care products, I would like to add something: 1) The price is too high. Similar books sell for less and unless this book has thousands of recipes, I don't see anything that would warrant such a high price. Now, don't get me wrong, I would love such a commission; I am unsure my visitors would pay that much. 2) The "Did you ever know" section is kind of unrelated to the rest of the page as it doesn't pertain to what you're selling. If you were selling a book on home remedies/cures, this would supplement it well, but you're selling an ebook on skin care so I don't see how weight loss and constipation qualities of guava juice compliment their benefits to the skin. 3) Pictures in testimonials. Honestly, they look fake to me. You also say: "Taj cosmetics costs $127 out in stores. But you can download it here for a one time offer for just $47." - which stores? A Google search doesn't give me any results so I don't know which stores you are referring to. I don't want to come off as criticizing you, just pointing out stuff that would prevent me from promoting it. Good luck in any case
I agree on all of those points. To me, COSMETICS mostly means MAKE-UP...and it doesn't appear that you are selling recipes for home-made makeup products...and if you were, I doubt there would be much call for such a thing. Perhaps reworking it to be "TAJ Cosmetics presents Natural Skin Care" or "TAJ Cosmetics presents Natural Skin Remedies" I would present TAJ COSMETICS as a "brand" and present this book as one of your new products. Here are the things that would need to change for ME to promote this: -rework the title as I pointed out above -Lower the price to maybe $34.95 or even $29.95 -Fix the FAKE looking testimonial pics -Make the sales pitch clear as to WHAT the product is -Get rid of the silly "this sells for $127" claim These are just my opinions. P.S. And please stop spamming members via PM about your product!
thank you guys..... i'll be working on every advice... i'm totally a newbie to this kinda platform.... so ready to accept more advice.... and sorry about the pm i didn't mean to spam u..
The hold concept of your product sounds interesting. Definitely seems like something I would consider promoting - but since I’m also a newbie here, I'm going to wait and hear what the older - more experience heads have to say about the modifications you have made, after they finish scrutinizing your site.
Looks much much better! I would still change the main heading...instead of saying "Download Recipes of Herbal Cosmetics Now..." I would say something like: "Stop wasting money on expensive over-hyped beauty products! Our All-Natural Skin/Hair Care recipes will save you hundreds and give you better results!" Maybe not that exactly, but you get the idea. Good job so far on the changes, I think you will see that it is now something that affiliates will be interested in promoting. Note: I would also have someone with English as a first language, proof read your copy...I see a few lines that are worded strange, and grammar errors.