New at Landing Pages: Please Review

Discussion in 'ClickBank' started by wccanuck, Aug 19, 2009.

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    Hi there, Ive been an affiliate for a year and a half now and have mostly have had success building websites and blogs. The problem is, these drive lots of traffic but low conversions. I have created a landing page to have higher conversions for my next project. If anyone could review and tell me where I would be scaring off potential customers, lol. This would be greatly appreciated.

    happypappyblog.com/fatloss4idiots
     
    Last edited: Aug 19, 2009
    wccanuck, Aug 19, 2009 IP
  2. wccanuck

    wccanuck Guest

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    thanks for the reply, I have a suscribe option for when people leave the page. Is a popup the wrong way to go, like is it too forced? I also have an option at the bottom of the page. Right now my offer is for free recipes that would usually cost them money....
     
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    You say: 'if you order fatloss4idiots through some other sites link, you will not receive a 50% discount and will not receive the special bonuses.'

    Let's say you pay them your cut.. What happens if they ask a refund from Fatloss4idiots?

    You lose money...
     
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    the 50% offer is being offered by clickbank, i think I should rephrase my line, thanks!
     
    wccanuck, Aug 19, 2009 IP