New Affiliate website for review

Please provide some tips on this website Affiliate Power Secret, i am very open to constructive criticism! Please give some input


Thanks in Advance

 

It looks like every other ebook site (which when I personally see I think "Oh ffs man not another one" maybe others are different but that's how I am) I think you should make an entirely different design, make it like you would a normal site or perhaps make another site altogether and slide the product in. I don't think there's much else I can say, just personally I don't like those long sales letter kind of sites.

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Something like this one weight loss handbook a wordpress site

 

Yeah man, it looks more professional than a sales letter like. Also that way you could venture into other forms of income even though I can see you just want to promote the product

 

This looks good right about now

 

i like the way this blog looks, and much material too

 

Thanks for the input, i will try and make a wordpress for the site

 

it's LP

i think it's too more text

 

i think it's very simple and not original, but... as long as it works

 

Very nice. Please post how your conversion rate turns out.

 

Within half a second I'd switched off, as it has that horrible spammy ebook look to it.

 

change your background.. and add some real testimonials your sales will increase give me a free copy i will give you 5 Real testimonials.. send me a PM

 

Dont mind!

but it looks as of any other text only site

 

The most pressuring thing is the need to change the background color. The typography could be better - you may want to adjust the font size, paragraphs and padding. Stop overusing the <b> tag, it looks rather amateurish.

 

It looks like most other landing pages, however, I would throw in some video testimonials if you can get some as well as some more pictures.

 

It's fine and nice. It will help me much.