Hi good people, I have just created a campaign through AdWords for my online web store. I will greatly appreciate it if you can criticize my landing page. This is the first page that a visitor who clicks my ad will see. Do you think it will convert to sales? What would you recommend I change? Thank you. PS: If you like you can rate it on a scale of 1 to 5. 5 being the best. And also in addition to your rating, a few words will be appreciated. The landing page is here: mydotcomsavings.com.
Oh I'm sorry, I just realized that I don't have enough posts to add a live link to my posting. Hmm, how else can I provide the link? OK I will go and contribute to the forums and when I earn enough points, I will then add the link. Thanks.
> mydotcomsavings.com This is your landing page? For every item? Think of your visitor. If I am looking for a DVD player and click your ad and land on that page, I would be so disappointed I'd leave immediately. No sale and you spent money for me to see that page. Don't expect me to search your site as I just did a search in Google. Oh, and your QS would be at the lowest because the keyword would be irrelevant. This would drive your costs up and you'd be another clueless advertiser saying that Adwords didn't work for you and must be a scam. My rating: 0.
thank you for your review and suggestions. really appreciate it. so in order to be successful, do you suggest i only advertise a product that i think will sell and thus create a landing page for that particular product? this way when a customer searches for my product's keyword on google and find my ad, they will land on that particular product? my initial intention was to showcase my entire shop so my landing page will be targeting a more broader audience. do you suggest i use the store's url as the landing page and forget about the landing page at mydotcomsavings.com? thanks a lot!
my opinion is your site didn't have much stocks for the customer to choose. Like me browsing to your site interested for Blackberry phone or Apple phones. but didn't fiind one. So my rating is also 0. Very disappointed..
> do you suggest i only advertise a product Yes, advertise each product individually, not the store as a whole. > create a landing page for that particular product? You've already got landing pages for each product. Use them. > do you suggest i use the store's url as the landing page and forget about the landing page at mydotcomsavings.com? I just noticed that the products are on dotcomsavings.com so yes. Google will force you to use that as the display URL anyway. Or move everything to mydotcomsavings.
Thanks for responding to my post. Yes you wont find everything on my site. It's not amazon. But the stuff that you will find on my site are cheaper than amazon most of the time. And thats my business model.
i think the landing page is good but should we change color of the "Shop now" button? I recommend the GREEN color because it will catch more attention, I guess. And the DOWN narrow next to the word "Shop now", I think we should use the NEXT narrow instead.