I'm nubie.. n still trying make a blog... plis review my simple blog... www.mbotee.com pliss give me critism, coz im not designer.. Thanks very much..
Very interesting photos...are those ones you have taken yourself? Personally, I find it hard to read white text on a dark background, so my critique would be to lighten up the text block backgrounds.
Looks good. Work on the ads. They are overlapping. The add on top is too big, it overlaps to the brown at the right side. The ad at the right side, overlaps to the black background. Nice color combination. Change the image on top, what does a plant have to do with your site? Also change the text on top make it "Computer". Make the titles bigger. good luck!
adsense still not in the right position (sidebar adsense), and btw your blog looks like blogger than wordpress ya?
@ finboy hahahaha, thanks sob.. lam kenal yo... @ asep_dadang aku ga ngerti om gimana biar bisa pas centre tu adsense... @ .grey. I have been refining my site, pliz check again.. thanks for ur advice.. @ artsurd8 & barefoot & 2advance Thank u very much, i have been improve my site thanks for ur advice 2.. ReCheck my Blog..
Ok.. just a few of my initial thoughts - 1. I really think the top band is too thick. The content of the page starts way below on the browser window. 2. The subscribe button is too big! 3. The Ads on right side in the bright green are blaring.. The color is the content not.. so if you are looking at ad revenue, you should make it more soothing and integrated into the colors. 4. Alignment across the site needs to be better. In case you are looking for a professional to do this .. (really cheap).. Search for Magnon International and ask for me.
Your blog is cool, but you need to add more contents to make people stay on your blog. I also suggest you to put "read more" on each of your article so you'll earn more hits
nice blog i like it... but please update the content continuous its make the visitor always come to your blog... good work pal
@ dpmax thanks for ur attention, i will update every 3 days... @ creativerar: thanks, hope in Other times u can visit my blog again
A few small things first. Hobies is spelled hobbies. Bloging is blogging. Komputer should be computer. The header is too big especially with the 2 advertiser you got below it. The purple ad sense wraps for me. I dont know if this is what you wanted or to put both ads on the same line. There is a word press plug in for adsense that lets you place adds in the blog post which would still give your ads and save some header space.