Hi Guys, It's me again. I've been tweaking a few pages on my website. I need some harsh criticism on these pages: http://moveelo.com/request-a-mobile-website/ http://moveelo.com/ What you do think when you first land on the page? Are you confused at any point? Are you compelled you to take the next step? What's the biggest reason that would make you not go forward? Also, please tell me what you like/don't like about the design. Thanks in Advance!
THE BIGGEST PROBLEM! You can't demonstrate any works completed? Anyone viewing would have to take a leap of FAITH. The deisgn is clean, and simple. Well done. If "Clinton" has worked with 50+ ..... get the brands out there. Get the testimonials. Altogether very good clean simple design, which probably would do what it said on the tin. But again, a leap of faith is needed. Best of luck.