Need to rewrite compelling testimonials.

Discussion in 'Copywriting' started by Optimus Crime, Sep 13, 2007.

  1. #1
    Hello everyone!

    For an ebook launch next week I would be requiring about 31 power testimonials rewritten (completely in your own, better words).

    I will provide you with 31 already made testimonials that would be used as template or rewording.

    Please PM me your best quote.

    ASAP.

    Thank you.
     
    Optimus Crime, Sep 13, 2007 IP
  2. xhitandrun

    xhitandrun Peon

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    #2
    Are you looking for someone to rewrite all 31?
    Are you just looking to make the previous testimonials longer or something like that?
    I think that I might be interested :]
     
    xhitandrun, Sep 13, 2007 IP
  3. netliving

    netliving Well-Known Member

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    #3
    You might want to check the FTC site before hiring people to write fake testimonials. http://www.ftc.gov/

    Not only is it unethical but also illegal.

    It's pretty easy to get real testimonials. Just give away your product to a limited number of people and have them send you a testimonial.
     
    netliving, Sep 19, 2007 IP
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  4. DeiformArtics

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    i completely agree... writing fake testimonials is illegal and unethical... it might lead u to legal actions... give ur book to a few people and let them write original testimonials for ur eBook.
     
    DeiformArtics, Sep 20, 2007 IP
  5. vlschieltz

    vlschieltz Guest

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    As I understand it correctly, you are looking for someone to rewrite 31 testimonials for you? How long is each one? I charge $5 per 500 words. I have been freelance writing for quite a while now, have written for many clients on a whole array of different subjects. I am a former English teacher with excellent communication, copy writing, editing and proofreading skills. Also, I was born in the U.S. so English is my mother tongue.

    Thanks,
    vlschieltz
     
    vlschieltz, Sep 25, 2007 IP
  6. Stephen Doyle

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    $5 for 500 words

    is this a typo :)

    if not i am seriosly out of the bidding.

    in fairness though - a case study will always beat a testimonial.

    31 testimonials is a lot but will it build the trust and lead the prospect to action

    tell the whole story with a case study, state what the original problems was and then how you solved the problems and they have gone on to achieve....

    Kind Regards
    Stephen Doyle

    email: steve@ccuk-ltd.com
    web: ccuk-ltd.com

    Killer Copy Writing
    Super Human Sales Training
    Direct Marketing
     
    Stephen Doyle, Sep 25, 2007 IP
  7. jhmattern

    jhmattern Illustrious Member

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    #7
    1. In the US at least, it's illegal (false advertising issues).
    2. Unless you own the copyright to the existing testimonials (or have explicit permission from the actual copyright holder), it's also illegal to have them "rewritten" in any way.

    Be careful with a project like this. It's always best to just have real testimonials.
     
    jhmattern, Sep 25, 2007 IP
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  8. fathom

    fathom Well-Known Member

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    #8
    I believe you where absolutely correct with #1... and #2 doesn't apply... nothing can negate false claims.
     
    fathom, Sep 25, 2007 IP
  9. demonpublisher

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    Lets face it, most testimonials are BS. I am often suprised by how much they can improve conversion rates, which shows that some people take them on face value.
     
    demonpublisher, Sep 30, 2007 IP