Need Someone to Review this two banner that i made.

Discussion in 'Graphics & Multimedia' started by marki8, May 14, 2008.

  1. #1
    Hi,

    i need you to review my banner that i already made today,

    i want to buy blog ads and i want to put this banner, so what you think?

    can this banner will attract blogger to come my directory?

    468x60
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    125x125
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    88x31
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    what you think? and what i need to change?

    This Banner For Free Blog Directory

    thanks open this thread....
     
    marki8, May 14, 2008 IP
  2. Digital_Designer

    Digital_Designer Banned

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    #2
    I Think in all banners texts are not easily readable.

    In 1st banner , increase time of frames .
    In 2nd banner, change color of texts may be white so that visitors can read texts easily.
    3rd banner can be more bright.

    Overall , make good combination of colors and set time of frames according to requirement.

    Thanks !
     
    Digital_Designer, May 14, 2008 IP
  3. glitto

    glitto Notable Member

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    #3
    1. Font selection is not attractive.
    2. Banners are very dark... should have some kind of brightness.
    3. There is no message like (Click Here) and also the URL is not clear from your banners.

    Hope my feedback will help you :)
     
    glitto, May 14, 2008 IP
  4. CayCay

    CayCay Guest

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    #4
    Yes I agree, the mentioned things have to be changed, otherwise no visitors.
     
    CayCay, May 14, 2008 IP
  5. JesseE

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    #5
    Ya you should think about changing up the font it's not that attractive or eye catching.
     
    JesseE, May 14, 2008 IP
  6. Norebbo

    Norebbo Active Member

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    #6
    For me, the top one is too fast, and the bottom one is too slow.
     
    Norebbo, May 14, 2008 IP
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    avtomat Banned

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    #7
    The first one quite fast
    The second one needs more frames.
    The third one not very clear
     
    avtomat, May 15, 2008 IP
  8. marki8

    marki8 Well-Known Member

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    #8
    hei all,

    thanks cause give your honest review :)

    i will edit it back...
     
    marki8, May 15, 2008 IP
  9. memfish

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    #9
    i think so
     
    memfish, May 16, 2008 IP
  10. gandham

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    #10
    You need to choose better fonts and change the frame times
     
    gandham, May 16, 2008 IP
  11. hijo

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    #11
    Great banner. I like the 468 x 60 banner. Easy to read and very deatailed.
     
    hijo, May 17, 2008 IP
  12. giorgioarmani

    giorgioarmani Well-Known Member

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    #12
    The changing frames are far too fast, it makes it impossible to read in a comfortable way!
     
    giorgioarmani, May 17, 2008 IP
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    #13
    There is no contrast in the "Free listing..." text with the background.
    The text is not well aligned, you must read some basic typography reference.
    There is only a small difference in the font size, the important thing must be bigger then the rest.
     
    remoradea, May 17, 2008 IP
  14. Valto

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    #14
    Would make them lighter in color and slow down the first one (like others have commented also)
     
    Valto, May 18, 2008 IP