Need some opinions

Hello,
I would like some oppinions regarding these two sites :

http://www.slabesteurgent.ro and http://www.slabeste-inteligent.ro

The sites were not made by me but I`m very curious of your oppinions and critiques. The sites look one to each other very much that is why http://www.slabesteurgent.ro is now in a process of redesign proposed by me.

Thanks,
Dks

 

you websites look like tele-shopping tv advertising "lose 50 kgs in 2 weeks" , words like "revolutionary" makes people to think that they will lose weight with some pills or something like this. To lose weight, you need work and work and work, try to meke it to look like getfit.ro .

 

thedark should I undestand you are romanian ? thanks for your suggestions , as I said it was not my ideea and in time the design of these sites will change , at least the design of one site because I proposed it to the owner

regards

 

the menu is not too expresive, it don't look like a website, it looks like an advertisment, like pages where are ebooks for sale, for example: http://www.seobook.com/buy-now.shtml

you should make a left menu, where people will easy see the navigation of your website, to know where to start searching for what they want.

And yes, i'm romanian, these are your websites ?

 

The sites have an "impact" quality - so that can work well for you.

 

try having a left hand side scroll column. that would be more effective

 

1. the sites are not mine
2. one of these sites is now in a process of redesign I will be back when the new sites is online
3. Thanks for your opinions regarding it.

 

work on css, link colours and navigation