Need some opinions for my new blogs(new to blogging)

Discussion in 'Reviews' started by clinton, Nov 2, 2007.

  1. #1
    I decided that I need to try out blogging, so I started using blogger.

    I don't have very many Blog posts yet. I just made these blogs a while ago.
    Tell me what you think I need to add(layout wise).

    SEO Blog

    Php Programmer Blog

    I'm making another one yet about stupid people on the internet but I can't show it to anyone yet.

    any comments appreciated:)

    thanks
     
    clinton, Nov 2, 2007 IP
  2. Anita

    Anita Peon

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    If you're looking to create a little (e.g. <$1/day) adsense revenue, these are a good start. If you want a following, the content and writing style isn't that catching. It reads like it was written by a non English speaker, and contains many grammatical and spelling mistakes (e.g. it's "abide" not "a bide"). Plus, starting out posts with "this post is about ... " distances the reader from you.
     
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    RovingCalypso Well-Known Member

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    Heres a short review about the design aspects of both the blogs.

    For the SEO one, it looks way too plain. You surely can find a better wordpress theme (they are free).

    For the second one, add a sidebar, will improve things alot.
     
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    madmax728 Banned

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    If you target a niche become best in it and then go to the next.
     
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    TBH, I think you need to work on the design of both. Maybe a logo - ie less text.
     
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