Hey there guys.. I just completed my website and need your comments about it.. do you think its ready to sell? there is not a affiliate page right now but Im working on it.. I need comments about main page.. website--> http://www.becomeagirlmagnet.com thank you..
Congrats man You did well on that. But in my opinion it will be better if you choose a suitable background for that.
It definitely looks a lot better than it did when you posted your first thread - massive improvement.. as for if its ready to "sell" then I think: Yes - its ready for you to start driving traffic to it and seeing if it converts, tweaking it more, trying different things to see what works.. Nop - its not ready for affiliates, most people just launch at this point anyway and expect affiliates to do the testing for them, but I promise you that if you go away and do some really solid testing and come back with a conversion rate tested on 2000 visits that people will take you a lot more seriously and get involusvert then it just isn't ready still... but even then, it's better for it to fail for you and for you to be able to develop it rather than it failing for affiliates and not being able to get them back to try again. Good luck man, it does looks 100x better now
Hey my friend, Good job on the sales page. I think that you could re-write these two lines with a little conversational hypnosis: "Without this formula, your social future will be a frustrating roller-coaster ride of hit-and-miss… ...Read Every Last Word Of This Article & You'll Discover The Key To Becoming A Girl Magnet... " This line is actually reminding me of past failures and making me feel negative towards your sales message - subconsciously. I'm an MNLP (Master, Neuro Linguistic Programming). I think that something like my suggestion below might be more effective toward getting your readers interested on a subconscious level. Suggestion: As you read and apply this formula now, you can feel good that the frustrating roller-coaster ride of hit-and miss in your social relationships is over forever. As you're reading every word of this article, you may find yourself discovering the key to easily and effortlessly becoming a "Chick Magnet"... I like your site - maybe just play with some of the wording a little, as above, Regards, Dave
submp3...yea.. you know about my website.. we talked about it couple of times with you I'm glad to hear you liked it.. thanks a lot! Dave...To be honest.. I liked your line better.. thanks a lot my friend!