Need my adwords landing page critiqued

Hi, this is my adwords landing page

holidayspecialist.webgains.info/tenerife-holidays

I have around 22 clicks at the moment, but no enquiries. Just need any suggestions for improving as far as the sales message and to get people to enquire!

Thanks Guys

Mark

 

Says the page isn't found now. Did you already take it down?

 

What sebasago says it's on your 404 page a present

 

I looked it over, I'm sure what I'm seeing is the start of a unfinished landing page. Let me know when it is finished I'll look it over for you.

 

got the address wrong,
its
holidayspecialist.webgains.info/tenerife-holiday

thanks

 

may

may be the due to wrong address.

 

Still wrong -- either that or your server is down -- it's not even going as far as 404 here on either link -- it's not even resolving the domain name.

 

that was years ago!! moved on

 

Oops, another bump by a new user that I didn't even notice was an old thread.