I am getting ready to send a blast email for my website and hope to gain some sales. here is my website link: www.completetrafficcourse.com Im wondering for the type of people clicking to my website from a email would think my page is way to long and nt read everything. please let me know if you think if it needs to be shortened down and if so what parts should i remove from my site? I am clueless of what to put in the subject line and in the body to gain click throughs. I was thinking of copying and pasting a line from my webpage it self for the body but cant decide which is strong enough to convert. any suggestions would be great. thanks
The page looks fairly good, moderately professional but with its simple one page flow of text (though I do like the changes in font style and colour so that there is some separation, but I would like to see a better division of each section/paragraph, perhaps more space between them) its design does look very home made. I would like to see either shortening of it, or add some other pages so that the viewer isn't hit with so much content at once and it doesnt look like you just copy pasted onto a front page. More pages will make it look like it took a lot more effort and development, therefore more professional. Regardless 4000 unique views should certainly lead to some conversion even if they are not targeted viewers, but I would make these alterations and then up your marketing efforts.