Need help with wording.

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    Is anyone here can make an editing and give the best for this wording :

    "Earn lots of cash and credits by click banners or text in this section!"

    Thanks.

    I really appreciate your help. :)
     
    PForex, Nov 9, 2006 IP
  2. AvarianParakeet

    AvarianParakeet Peon

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    #2
    You could use either "Earn lots of cash and credits by clicking banners or text in this section"

    Or, I personally prefer, "Click text or banners in this section to earn lots of cash and credits."
     
    AvarianParakeet, Nov 10, 2006 IP
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    2nd one is better Avarian :)
     
    Disguised, Nov 10, 2006 IP
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    jdR!pper Peon

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    I think it's better to say: "Just click for tons of cash!"
    It's short but sends your message to your reader clearly.
     
    jdR!pper, Nov 11, 2006 IP
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