Need help with TAG-LINE revision

Discussion in 'General Marketing' started by MarketingManOnline, Aug 28, 2006.

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    ‘Less Fatigued at the end of the work day’

    This is currently the tag-line for a company selling a shoe that makes you "less fatigued" at the end of the day compared to other sheos but we want to improve that. It's considered a shoe for professionals... who stand up all day

    We are trying to remove the "fatigued" element from it all together.

    Any suggestions?
     
    MarketingManOnline, Aug 28, 2006 IP
  2. Judd

    Judd Active Member

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    Less is more at the end of the day.
     
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  3. MarketingManOnline

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    thats pretty good.. but it has to apply to the shoes... i thought maybe, "Leaving your feet happy at the end of the work day" -- its kind of long... need more suggestions
     
    MarketingManOnline, Aug 28, 2006 IP
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    jhmattern Illustrious Member

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    "shoes that stand up to your workday"
     
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    "One Step Ahead of The Competition At The End Of The Workday( or just DAY)"
     
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    Shoes to help beat tired working feet.

    Shoes that beat tired from work feet.
     
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  7. MarketingManOnline

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    Awesome suggestions.. hopper -- how about "shoes that beat the tired out of your work day"

    JHMattern - +1, i like that.

    Thank you all!
     
    MarketingManOnline, Aug 29, 2006 IP