Need help with SEO...will stumble or add rep points in exchange

I just want a little advice.
I have 3 sites which I would like to optimize for Google or Yahoo.

I only need you to take a look at them (they're not in english) and suggest how to improve them in means of better search engine ranking. Please consider your comments.

And note; I mostly wish to rank for keywords while searching in slovenian!

I'll add rep points , if you want them, or I can stumble your site in exchange.

1. http://www.rwc-forum.net
This is a Slovenian Battle rap forum
Keywords I'd like to rank for: rap, hiphop, mp3

2. http://www.odprtakoda.org
Opensource portal (e107)
Keywords I'd like to rank for: odprta koda, linux, opesource, e107

3. http://www.slomyspace.com
Myspace pimper classic stuff
Keywords I'd like to rank for: myspace, myspace slovenija

 

first of all you need to add rap, hiphop and mp3 in the title "RWC Battle Rap Forum - All about Rap, Hiphop and Mp3" (slovenian equivalent of that sentence)

 

Are you sure? Will the search engine see all the words in the title tag?

 

Ok, you need some work with title for real. All your threads and posts (indexed) will use the same default title, make it so it displays the title of the thread or of the post at the beginning, example: http://www.rwc-forum.net/viewtopic.php?t=4897 has the same title as the main page, make it so the title shows as: V.I.D vs. G.T. - RWC Rap Forum - hip hop | rap | mp3 komadi.

Right now i don't have much time to give a long review but if you want you can read my post on building website thinking seo to get a picture of what changes you will need to make in your websites.