Need help for school paper!

Discussion in 'Google AdWords' started by tfamily, Apr 1, 2005.

  1. #1
    I'm writing a school paper about online advertisement.What I'm trying to do is compare 4 ads, and rank them accordingly.

    (1) Fruits Online
    Send Fruits online.
    International delivery!!
    http://www.fruitsonline.com
    Keywords: Free shipping, delivery, fruits, apples

    (2)Ali Furniture Shop
    Tables, Chairs, dishes & Rugs
    from Middle East
    http://www.alifurniture.com
    Keywords: Table, Chair, Dish, Rug, Cup, Glass

    (3)Party Events
    Ideas for All Parties
    Party ideas for all!
    http://www.partyclownindallas.com/
    Keywords: Party clowns

    (4)Silky Hair
    Restore silky hair
    with Yuko System
    www.hairprocuts.com
    Keywords: Hair restoration, Yuko system, Silky hair

    I'm desperate! Can anyone help me figuring them out? Thank you.
     
    tfamily, Apr 1, 2005 IP
  2. noppid

    noppid gunnin' for the quota

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    #2
    This is either a kid in over his head or a clever spammer!

    Fruity party clowns with restored hair in chairs scare me.
     
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  3. tfamily

    tfamily Peon

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    No, I am serious, not a spammer. I am totally lost, need help desperately!
     
    tfamily, Apr 1, 2005 IP
  4. sarahk

    sarahk iTamer Staff

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    #4
    I don't think you've even tried to explain the context of your assignment. How about asking us to critique your work.

    Perhaps a fail here would be kindest - it would show your teachers that they too have failed as they haven't managed to communicate the key points.

    Sarah
     
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  5. noppid

    noppid gunnin' for the quota

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    #5
    URL backlinks and indexed pages for each.

    Keyword and anchor text position for each.

    That should keep ya busy.

    search for link: inurl: allinurl: assuming you're gonna use google. Mind you, I'm a coder, not an SE(O) anything.
     
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  6. fryman

    fryman Kiss my rep

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    LMAO!! :D
     
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  7. noppid

    noppid gunnin' for the quota

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    It's the alcohol. :D
     
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  8. magellan

    magellan Guest

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    Need more details...
     
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  9. Umbertide

    Umbertide Peon

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    I can help, or rather, I can give my opinion.

    First, develop your evaluation criteria. I suggest:

    Keywords - you are a looking for relevance to what is being sold. For example, Free Shipping is pointless, Yuko System is targetted, Table, Cup, Glass, etc is just naive.

    Headline - the hardest bit - is the benefit or feature being brought through? For example; Silky Hair is what people are probably hoping for. Ali Furniture Shop tells nothing.

    Call to action - the two lines under the heading - is there one? Is it compelling? Will is match the keyword and heading (and whats being sold?) "Middle East" - some people see this as positive, others it will promote risk - which you completely need to avoid

    URL - of less importance, but still has importance. It should reflect whats being sold, but not too niche. partyclownsindallas is too niche imho. OK the URL should "do what it says on the tin" but not so tightly to exclude 99% of browsers.

    So then what you do is give each ad a score out of 10 for each aspect in my list above. Add them up and hey presto, your rank.

    So I hope I have helped without actually giving the answer. Good luck!
     
    Umbertide, Apr 2, 2005 IP
  10. tfamily

    tfamily Peon

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    >>Umbertide
    Thank you for your advice. I know the question was too broad. That is exactly where I got stuck!
    (All of those examples are hyperthetical, don't actually exist.)
    Spring break is alomost over. I'll have to work really hard!
    Again, thank you for your comment.
     
    tfamily, Apr 2, 2005 IP
  11. FFF

    FFF Peon

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    Hi tfamily,

    Can I Help you? Please PM me in detail.

    Thanks
    Frank
     
    FFF, Apr 9, 2005 IP
  12. YoungCoder

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    I dont want to go offtopic too much, but who in their right mind is going to buy fruit online... :confused:
     
    YoungCoder, Apr 9, 2005 IP
  13. mcfox

    mcfox Wind Maker

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    #13
    There are loads of fruits online
    :D
     
    mcfox, Apr 9, 2005 IP