Need Few articles to be reviwed

Discussion in 'Websites' started by soul-healer, Sep 19, 2005.

  1. #1
    Hi,

    -I just start writting and want experts to review my writting style and suggest me as i need to learn from proffesional who are in this field i have written these articles in sence to earn few money so please guide me if i am wrong:

    Links are:

    http://www.hostfinders.org/articles/10/1/Unlimited-space-and-bandwidth,-Is-it-possible?

    http://www.hostfinders.org/articles/9/1/Difference-between-Bandwidth-and-Data-Transfer

    http://www.hostfinders.org/articles/8/1/How-to-find-which-hosting-package-meets-your-needs


    thanks in advance for all your time and effort.

    Regards,
    yousaf FAYYAZ.
     
    soul-healer, Sep 19, 2005 IP
  2. mhdoc

    mhdoc Tauren

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    "Most of the web hosting companies talk about bandwidth and data transfer same as one another but truth be known they are different although very closely related."

    I would say (American english).

    Most web hosting companies talk about bandwidth and data transfer as if they were the same thing. However, bandwidth is ... and data transfer is ... The difference is important to you as a web hosting customer because ...

    I always recommend Strunk & White, The Elements of Style as a short and simple book to read for improving writing skills. Good luck.
     
    mhdoc, Sep 19, 2005 IP
  3. soul-healer

    soul-healer Peon

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    Thanks alot mhdoc ... i am new in this field and learning ... more suggestions from all the members would be apperciated
     
    soul-healer, Sep 19, 2005 IP
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    juanda Well-Known Member

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    great articles soul-healer
     
    juanda, Sep 20, 2005 IP
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    soul-healer Peon

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    thanks alot juanda .. this is my first attempt as people told me that i cant write .. so i fasten my belt and write i will write more and share with you .. as writting articles needs knowledge and i am reading and learning and will come up with few more and share hear ..

    Thanks alot for all the people who gave me time and read my articles.

    Regards.
     
    soul-healer, Sep 20, 2005 IP