Need feedback regarding Design of website (urgent)

We have to show sample to client for website

here is the link of sample we have created
http://focusinfosoft.com/parasram/

please give your feedback , suggestions of improvement

Thanks

 

Looks ok, loads very very slow.

 

Looks great! It loaded fast for me.(about 1 sec.)

 

thanks for feedback
if you compare this design http://focusinfosoft.com/parasram/
with this design http://parasramindia.com. Which one do you think is better ?

 

This is better http://parasramindia.com/ it looks very active but well organized. I really like it! It makes me want to make some money!LOL

 

I get a blank page with the second site -parasramindia.com. The first site loaded quickly and is quite nice.

 

Wat changes do you recomment in http://focusinfosoft.com/parasram/
to make it more attractive than http://parasramindia.com.
Thanks

 

For a stock brokering site I thought http://parasramindia.com was the more appropriate of the two. And fyi, loaded kind of slowly for me.

 

The grunge fonts used on the first one dont really fit the rest of the site. Looks like a template that was added too. The first looks alot better.

 

I like focusinfosoft.com/parasram/ better but you should use more "professional" looking fonts. Also the ad copy is grammatically incorrect. it should be - Parasram is one of india's largest stock...

Are those suppose to be text links in the middle of the page. They don't look like the belong there.