Need Feedback on eBook Landing Page

Discussion in 'General Marketing' started by Guthix121, Feb 28, 2009.

  1. #1
    I'm writing a proxy eBook right now, and I would like some comments about the landing page I am building. It's not 100% complete, and the forms do not yet work since I am not done with the eBook.

    Ignore the testimonials, they are examples only.

    http://www.ultimateproxyguide.com
     
    Guthix121, Feb 28, 2009 IP
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    wrekoniz3 Well-Known Member

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    It looks pretty good. Nice job. :cool:
     
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    #3
    The testimonials are the best part. Good job on the landing page.

    If you are into training NPC is one of the best I have seen. I don't like subscriptions but they give a lot at their site. You could probably get through most of it in 1 month. You can check it out by copying and pasting this:

    https://imi.infusionsoft.com/go/npc/a5387/

    Best 2 U,

    Leiif
     
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  4. Guthix121

    Guthix121 Well-Known Member

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    Thanks guys, anybody else?
     
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    studygm Peon

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    Though I have not really believed in proxy networks, you got me there. I was taken in by the consise and logical testimonials.
     
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    Grit. Well-Known Member

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    It reminds me of most ebook selling sites... however, personally i'm not a fan of the logo in the top, the logo could be better in my opinion, however the site is adequate for what you're selling
     
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  7. Guthix121

    Guthix121 Well-Known Member

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    The testimonials were examples - they aren't real.
    Hmm, I kind of like the concept of the logo, but it does stick out a little.
     
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  8. zeekstern

    zeekstern Active Member

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    The "looks" of your site is great. Even the header:))
    A few things about your content.

    1. Who is your target audience? If it is only people that already know something about a Proxy network, then that would be ok. Except that why would they pay you $20 for the info?

    2. If your target audience is everyone, then you need to at least explain something about what a Proxy network is.

    3. I'm assuming that you did your keyword and market research and determined that there is really a need for your product? It seems like it will take a lot of work to set it up and only make $20. Doesn't really appeal to me:))

    Good luck,
    Zeek
     
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  9. Guthix121

    Guthix121 Well-Known Member

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    My target audience is webmasters who want to make money online. I guess I should probably write a paragraph or two on what a proxy network is.
     
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    PerfectMoney Banned

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    My review is ,how you could guarantee that the use of proxy will benefit me and not running against the TOS of many advertising there.I meant many proxy user use this black hat technique to combine with proxy setting
     
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    The site looks great! Good luck with sales, hopefully it allows you to extend your network even further haha ;)
     
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    Guthix121 Well-Known Member

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    My eBook contains 0 blackhat methods for running proxies, and only mentions advertisement networks that allow proxies.

    Update: I just updated my webpage with a 'What is a Proxy' segment.
     
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    Yeah not bad atall, the headline could do with a stronger call to action.
     
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    very nice i like it a lot =] goof luck with the sales!
     
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    Nice Guthix121!! Your explanation really makes a difference.

    Zeek
     
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    Guthix121 Well-Known Member

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    OK Thanks :)
     
    Guthix121, Mar 2, 2009 IP