Hello DP members, It would be great if you could review some articles I have written and provide your feedback on them. Your suggestions will greatly help me improve my further writings. These are 4 articles in all, 2 from iPhones/Smartphones niche and 2 from Blogging. Iphones/Smartphones: http://www.eshoppersmag.com/points-consider-buying-used-iphones/ http://www.eshoppersmag.com/smartphone-service-centers-increasing-number/ Blogging: http://www.eshoppersmag.com/blogging-a-growing-social-phenomenon/ http://www.eshoppersmag.com/some-helpful-tips-to-become-a-successful-blogger/ In case these articles do not appear on the given links for some reason, please check out the PDF uploaded here. Any constructive comments are highly appreciated. Thanks in advance.
Read the last article on blogging and the writing style and quality of the article is great but there is nothing in the article which casual blogger don't knows about and all in the industry these days knows about regular blog updates, keeping users engaged etc.
Thanks for your feedback @jazzyjmnote. You are right. The article deals only with some very basic points about blogging. I guess I'll have to inject some new stuff in it. Any suggestions on what it should include ….. I mean esp. some points about becoming a successful blogger that are not commonly found on the web?
Everything is found on the web these days. You have to add your own personal experience, something more personal, sometimes, to make good content. For instance, I keep a blog that tracks every step I take exploring internet marketing and a particular program specifically. I show my readers (who are very few in number) my whole process. Other sites advertising the product or program I'm talking about just post one thing about how great it is. The sad thing is I'm getting nothing (yet) and they've got a bunch of recruits even though my content is superior by far. So maybe I don't know what I'm talking about. I looked through your articles and thought they were good. What is your goal in writing them exactly? Just curious. Hope this helps a bit.
Well, there was no goal as such when I started writing them. I was planning to put some stuff up on that site and though blogging and iPhones would be good niches to start with. Both are popular and I figured out it will help some pages on the site to get indexed faster. I just collected some things randomly and tried to combine all good points I had come across in one piece. I don't run my own blog yet. So I think this is where I lack the personal experience which I agree is very necessary to give your piece a unique touch. Thanks for the insightful points. I will keep them in mind when I write something about blogging next time.