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Need designer advice - Email Header

Discussion in 'Photoshop' started by Georgi S., Aug 3, 2017.

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    Hello,
    My name is Georgi and I am not a designer but currently I am designing a header for an email.
    Email is dedicated to shops (business to business). I need advices and opinions. I attached, what I have now.
    The most important topics to discuss:
    • Saturation/level of Magenta side
    • Text position
    • Empty space
    I dislike the part beginning with "Buy" and ending with "September". How can I make it better/redo? 213.jpg
    SEMrush
     
    Georgi S., Aug 3, 2017 IP
    SEMrush
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    It should be either "DON'T MISS IT!" or "DON'T MISS OUT!".

    I also don't quite like "Soviet Christmas ornaments". Do you mean to say "vintage Russian Christmas ornaments"?
     
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    Thank you for your response! These ornaments are from Soviet times so I wrote it like this. Probably you are right!
     
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    Now it looks like this. What do you think?
    1111.jpg
     
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    If I didn't read the text I'd think you're selling strawberries. The ornaments in the background look like them. Is it intentional?

    Make the colors of the ornaments show and just put a darker transparent overlay over it so that the text would still stand out.
     
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    Thank you! I will try.
     
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