Hello, My name is Georgi and I am not a designer but currently I am designing a header for an email. Email is dedicated to shops (business to business). I need advices and opinions. I attached, what I have now. The most important topics to discuss: Saturation/level of Magenta side Text position Empty space I dislike the part beginning with "Buy" and ending with "September". How can I make it better/redo?
It should be either "DON'T MISS IT!" or "DON'T MISS OUT!". I also don't quite like "Soviet Christmas ornaments". Do you mean to say "vintage Russian Christmas ornaments"?
Thank you for your response! These ornaments are from Soviet times so I wrote it like this. Probably you are right!
If I didn't read the text I'd think you're selling strawberries. The ornaments in the background look like them. Is it intentional? Make the colors of the ornaments show and just put a darker transparent overlay over it so that the text would still stand out.
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