need critique

Discussion in 'Graphics & Multimedia' started by allawy, Jul 17, 2009.

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    this logo is for someone who creates customized solutions to help others get organized. They help their clients find balance, restore order and maximize their resources.
    i tried to make the letter s with circles and squares ,inside this you can find a ?
     

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    allawy, Jul 17, 2009 IP
  2. Poemo

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    Hmmmm. The colors and shapes are awesome. But I think the text should be moved up a bit. Other than that great job!
     
    Poemo, Jul 19, 2009 IP
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    It looks good but, I looked at the image before reading the post and couldn't find the letter "s" in the circles and sqares. After I read it was supposed to be an "s" I've seen it.
     
    prajnaseeker, Jul 20, 2009 IP
  4. xyunaxfantasiesx

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    I like it. The design is clean and eyecatching. However, I'm not too fond of the typography and its placement. I would remove the "s" in sorting and move the text up below the shorter line/design by 2-3 pixel.
     
    xyunaxfantasiesx, Jul 21, 2009 IP
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    for me maybe you work more in your TEXT.. you can move it up a little bit or make it center.. and them your text maybe find other font, to make it professional look.. But i like the "S"... nice idea.. keep it up...
     
    apex2009, Jul 21, 2009 IP
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    to be honest, 'S' shape could be better. and also the colours, they might not be visible on a any background except white.
     
    yodayoz, Aug 5, 2009 IP