need criticism for my new site

Discussion in 'Search Engine Optimization' started by orgolan, Jan 17, 2009.

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  1. #1
    hi,
    i just built a new site and already put ads from google.

    http://how-to-refinance-mortgage-loan.com/

    how is it look?
    i really think its finished
    anyone think i should fix something?
     
    orgolan, Jan 17, 2009 IP
  2. arramuse

    arramuse Active Member

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    Have targeted Keywords , but Visitor will difficult to remember and Direct...
     
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  3. unna

    unna Well-Known Member

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    yes, URL is very difficult to learn........

    very few chance to get direct traffic
     
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  4. orgolan

    orgolan Peon

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    my keyword density its 2.2%
    its ok? or should be more then 3%?

    i don't worry for direct traffic couse i am targeting for google organic
     
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    magda Notable Member

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    It's not very well written - sentences are long and confusing, and contain glaring errors e.g
    "and even sometimes even to meet"
    "type of interest rate his is paying on "
    "the home owner sure make that"
     
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    indiaseoservice Peon

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    Most of the thing looks perfect but Meta tag implementation not completed so implement meta tags, and important thing for blog is make unique and useful informative post and if possible than provide do follow comment it helps you to get more visitors on your blog.
     
    indiaseoservice, Jan 17, 2009 IP