Need basic copywright help

I recommend paying a professional to scrap what you have and start fresh. It's a good rough draft but needs some help.

You guys....now my spleen hurts...damn...

 

A salesman knocks on the door. A little boy answers. The salesman says, "Is your mom at home?" Little boy replies back, "She ain't here." The salesman exclaims, "Where is your grammar?!" Little boy says, "She ain't here neither."



lol poor cash. Sorry to laugh at you, but here's ten bucks to go towards your "I need to go back to school" fund.

*checking for any grammar errors before posting*

Now let's get this pathetic thread back on track, before I lock it!


Edited because I spelled "on" wrong.


*ducks for cover*

 

Well, you owe me for a busted spleen, Perry.

 

Mind's association, suddenly I thought you meant Bonanza's Family Cartwright.

Nothing to do I know, but did you know a Google search returns 345,000 results for copywright?

First result explains common miss-spellings and miss-conceptions (sic) and, just for fun, second result discusses on the "Copywright" process,

http://copyrightservice.co.uk/copyright/miss_spellings

http://www.intelproplaw.com/Copyright/Forum/msg/7420.shtml

 

Lack of design and picture. Too plain. There is always room for improvement.

 

please write in your own simple language and short matter that will help you got sucess, buy or not, it will depend on you after make fresh.

 

hi gartar, try to change your head line.

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because I see your headline to generic. Who Else or what ever. People always use that headline. try to changes it.