Please offer opinions and comments on the sales copy and the layout and how I can make this website convert better. The url is http://mydiscountebooks.com Sorry if its kinda long but I will really appreciate any comments. Thanks in advance. Rob
The fonts are too big. The centered content is very hard to read. Try to organize the date into some logical blocks.
Yeah... the fonts are too large. When I opened your website, I felt like I opened a door and saw a really big guy in front of me. lol It's quite "confusing" for your eyes. Remember this when you reformat your text: when you read, your eye moves in Z pattern, try to also follow the Z in your layout. In this way, you direct the eyes of your visitors to the text that you want them to read. The layout is simply too tiring to read. I would also suggest adding some images to soften the heavy text format. I hope I didn't not offend you with my comments. Goodluck
Kassi: What do you mean by organize the data into some logical blocks? Can you explain this more or give an example? deviant: Not offended at all. If you got more keep it coming. Thanks for the comments. I will make the fonts smaller. Anyone else?
Ok the fonts are smaller now. Please tell me what ya think. Any other tips would be great. Dont hold back on me.
I agree with him. You can use a header to low the hardness of text and also reduce the size of the font and also don't use 100% black in text. Goodluck
definitely eliminate the need to scroll forever.....and add color...I'm not a fan of the text that looks to be highlighted, but that's just my opinion
good to hear that you were not offended. anyway, i want to suggest some adding quick links for easier navigation. the page is loaded with so much information, and it is too overwhelming. a sidebar with the links to the products you offer, or some navigation links will help your visitors find what they are looking for more easily.
I know the sales page is a bit long but I also know that long sales pages work. The bulk of the page is products descriptions. Some of them are kinda long so I was thinking about making the page shorter by shortening the product descriptions some. I have some of the text hi-lited in yellow because of fast scrollers. I know that when i come across a long sales page that I dont feel like reading, I scroll down real fast to the products but the text thats hi-lited in yellow catches my eye and thats about the only part of the page I read. I am going to work on the colors some more. I am currently writing my own split testing script so that I can test the changes I make before I start sampling with the colors, headlines, and header images. I know that sometimes one little change can make or break a conversion so I need to test every change. I should have the script done today. I also plan to change the listed bonuses. I have way better products I can use here but again I need to test. I also noticed that my hover ad is displaying properly in IE6 but not in firefox or IE7. Thats another thing I have to work on. Thanks for the comments fellas.