I got a blog, posted a little product review in a blogpost, and link it to my hop. This is my landing page: http://www.jksohu.com/2010/11/instant-access-to-14000-woodworking.html. Is it good enough? Or is it better to use redirect? This is my first time. Sorry to bother you guys, any advice is appreciated
Well...your first language definitely isn't English. It's not bad, but I would get someone who speaks English more fluently to edit some of the words and phrases that don't quite work.
" This awesome book, contain...." Get someone to edit your english. You are trying to build a reputation with your landing page and if it is full of mistakes and errors nobody is going to trust you and the success of this website will not be very good. You should also give more information about your personal experience with this book. You mentioned how at first you doubted the book but give your readers more of how this book benefits you and they might be more inclined to take your advice.
Go to a site like Fiverr.com and pay someone to clean it up a little for you. That will be a well-invested $5.
I checked and rechecked it again, and I can access it. Got that. Gonna change it soon. Thanks. Okay. Taken. Fixing is on the way Well, that's new for me. Gotta check that site out. Thanks. @All: I read some issue about saying "the truth" in the landing page, maybe in a DP thread, I forgot. In reality, I didn't buy the book.. But is it okay to just say I know the content? Or is there any legal/ethical problem with that? If not, what should I say in the landing page? Any hint is appreciated