Need a site review for a new product/service

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    jeffczyz, Jul 9, 2008 IP
  2. Dia88

    Dia88 Peon

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    I would introduce some pics of the product between the info. Its a bit boring to read the whole text without some pictures.
     
    Dia88, Jul 9, 2008 IP
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    ArticleScholar Well-Known Member

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    Feedback on the copy? It needs improvement. It needs to be more active. There are even some grammatical errors.
     
    ArticleScholar, Jul 9, 2008 IP
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    If it was a little wider, that form at the bottom would be closer to the top.
     
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