Need a quick review of my new Amazon affiliate website

Discussion in 'Websites' started by cri8bat, Oct 9, 2010.

  1. #1
    Hi,

    it is still under development....
    I hope to finish it by the end of next week

    however I would appreciate a quick review :)

    here is the URL: cleaning fiberglass shower stalls
     
    cri8bat, Oct 9, 2010 IP
  2. Tarum

    Tarum Active Member

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    #2
    Hey,

    when I first got on the site; bam, so much text and ads together. You do get used to it in a few seconds but a few lines wouldn't hurt and a bit less "text spam" design.

    Good luck! Just my opinion..
     
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  3. freshdevelopment

    freshdevelopment Notable Member

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    #3
    To be brutally honest... not great. It looks spammy and built for adverts.

    Try to create your website around what people want. Interesting and useful information on cleaning fibreglass shower stalls. Then think about adverts afterwards, in keeping with your site.
     
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  4. danniel

    danniel Banned

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    #4
    Find a nice template and then ask for review.
     
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    nihangshah Prominent Member

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    #5
    Make it beautiful. Put pictures and prices.
     
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    RadioBounce Banned

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    #6
    Dude, you need a proper design, this looks like a website which was made using tables when the Internet was first invented.

    In-case you don't know, we have CSS styles and HTML5 now!
     
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    Ubosje Peon

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    #7
    Apologies, new on the site here so appreciate your feedback and will start another threath. Thanks !
     
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  8. cri8bat

    cri8bat Well-Known Member

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    #8
    dude, incase you didnt saw the source code, the website was made using CSS :)
     
    Last edited: Oct 10, 2010
    cri8bat, Oct 10, 2010 IP
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    #9
    I have to say that the scrolling Amazon widget in the sidebar is a bit annoying, the content looks solid, it could be a bit more presentable though
     
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  10. getjimmy

    getjimmy Prominent Member

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    #10
    You should have posted in review forum.
     
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    #11
    nice i site. i am also planing to run this kind of site with amazon. But i dont know much about amazon. need some help you can.
     
    ashfaq, Oct 11, 2010 IP
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    RadioBounce Banned

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    #12
    I didn't bother checking your source code, my friend who is a complete novice when it comes to using computers, nevermind creating websites could create this website in Dreamweaver.

    You need to improve your CSS skills.
     
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    #13
    This is not a code assessment: You've done a good job in placing the images of shower stalls around your page, try adjusting the contrast of the images so they look sharper. You're menu needs to look distinct, while at the moment it blends in with the Google ads. Also, consider grouping the google ads in a dedicated area, there's too many around.

    With a bit of tweaks here and they, you can make it work, but at the moment, its a bit confusing as it doesn't look like a business webpage.
     
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  14. cri8bat

    cri8bat Well-Known Member

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    #14
    can you suggest me a review amazon forum pls, thank you
     
    cri8bat, Oct 11, 2010 IP
  15. cri8bat

    cri8bat Well-Known Member

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    I will make some tweaks every now end then (according to the analytics data), since this is a brand new website.
     
    cri8bat, Oct 11, 2010 IP
  16. sanchyclub

    sanchyclub Well-Known Member

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    #16
    simply is the always best but not this kind of simplicity...you have to build a standard template for your site...after that, put your content and images...
     
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    #17
    my friend i also have only criticism.

    it looks old style website. dont you listened about web 2.0
     
    Asif1, Oct 11, 2010 IP
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    ListBuildingForNewbies Peon

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    #18

    I totally agree. When you want to sell anything online then you have to make sure that your potential customer sees clearly what you're selling. If you clutter up your webpage, then surfers get confused. I also suggest you place all ads together in a specific part of your webpage.
     
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    Hi Cr8bat
    I think your site is too simple and the product picture is not well organized
     
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  20. cri8bat

    cri8bat Well-Known Member

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    ok guys, after reading your helpfull comments I decided to make a background image.

    what do you think now? better or is there more room for improvements.
     
    cri8bat, Oct 12, 2010 IP