Need a quick logo review

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  2. Soner

    Soner Active Member

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    #2
    If you try to create a brand, then remove the rose. I'd choose a more serious font.

    And I think shadow should be gone too. No need :)
     
    Soner, Sep 18, 2009 IP
  3. asoutiyal

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    #3
    yup, you need to work more on it........
     
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  4. Soner

    Soner Active Member

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    much more better than the first version :) keep working, you may want to check some logo competition websites.
     
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  5. Inside Sin

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    #5
    I'm guessing the O and the S have a big part, maybe it's a computer OS business?

    Otherwise the O and S shows me two big letters that have no direct focus meaning.

    Also, if you have the time and accuracy, just notch up the font yourself, make it more solid and less scratch. The shadow isn't working either, might decrease the distance a tiny fraction?
     
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  6. da3dalus

    da3dalus Member

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    #6
    Changed the font...made that O smaller ... looking for some more advice :D

    Oh and...the company is an internet hosting company. The site is rosehost.net . Do you think I should include de .net extension in the logo as well?
     
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  7. misterliquidcity

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    I would include the .net in perhaps in some smaller font imo. Also it looks grainy or something to me. Not quite sure why. I didnt see the previous look so I cant really compare the first one to this one.
     
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  8. cheesy

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    #8
    I don't like the bevel. It sticks out too much, you got the colours right though, keep workign on it.
    Maybe look at sites like logopond or somthing for inspiration.
     
    cheesy, Sep 18, 2009 IP
  9. Inside Sin

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    I agree with Cheesy, perhaps replace the O in host with the O in Rose to be a flower on fire or something?
     
    Inside Sin, Sep 18, 2009 IP
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    Pull out the Bevel&Emboss.I don't like that shadow in ROSE.
     
    manhst, Sep 19, 2009 IP
  11. da3dalus

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    #11
    Ok...here is another try...what do you think about this one? Is it better than the precedent one?:D

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  12. MayaLocke

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    #12
    I would add some type of image element. The first one is too blurred but what about adding some type of winding rose through the name?
     
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  13. Inside Sin

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    ^ MayaLocke, that's a great idea.

    A wrapping vine around the text would be hard but simply awesome! Maybe it could be computerised or something.
     
    Inside Sin, Sep 19, 2009 IP
  14. da3dalus

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    I don't know what to say...would it fit a Web Hosting Company ? :confused:
     
    da3dalus, Sep 19, 2009 IP
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    bukavu Active Member

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    #15
    I like this one , the second one better than the first one
     
    bukavu, Sep 19, 2009 IP
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    #16
    Personally, I think the beveling looks very cheap. Don't be afraid to keep your logo simple! Pick a nice font, and forget about the fancy effects and filters. The colors are good though - red and black work very well together.
     
    Norebbo, Sep 19, 2009 IP
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    Oops, I missed your revised version. Much better! I would simplify the font though...
     
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  18. seoeverything

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    #18
    Have you done a design with the O the same size in both words? I like it but I think you have a little ways to go!
     
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  19. Inside Sin

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    How about a vectored Rose? Not making it too fancy, but still relating it to Computers.
     
    Inside Sin, Sep 20, 2009 IP
  20. Charybdis

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    #20
    I suggest not blurring the O
     
    Charybdis, Sep 20, 2009 IP