Need a few expert-opinions on a design im making

Discussion in 'HTML & Website Design' started by AliR, Mar 27, 2010.

  1. #1
    I'm making a web-design for a website for my organization/student body. Its called "The Pakistan Revolution"

    I've come up with this so far:
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    http://www.imged.org/58/homepage3.png

    Any suggestions? what can i do to make it look neat/professional?
     
    AliR, Mar 27, 2010 IP
  2. Brad Proctor

    Brad Proctor Peon

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    #2
    It looks really good, I like the layout a lot. My only suggestion, and it's a small one, is to increase the spacing between lines of text.
     
    Brad Proctor, Mar 27, 2010 IP
  3. BLACKLIST84

    BLACKLIST84 Peon

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    it looks pretty good , but if you need some more help e-mail at perfect for DESIGNS.
     
    BLACKLIST84, Mar 27, 2010 IP
  4. LM-AndrewS

    LM-AndrewS Greenhorn

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    #4
    Same! My eyes just like crossed.
     
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  5. cheezedaze

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    Wow... have some green... I realize that Pakistan's colors are green, but I would de-saturate the green a bit and use it a little more sparingly. Maybe use some grey, like the link bar at the top, and then have the main image be your green and do a gradient fade into grey or white keeping the bottom image green and the center content with the shadow. Also, use more shades of green - more of the colors that are used in the "Pakistan Revolution" logo. It also would be wise to use another color to offset the green a bit - I would use blue or a rusty-red color.
     
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  6. Dee2007

    Dee2007 Active Member

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    It's nice, but I would have to agree that for me personally there's a bit too much Green.
     
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  7. AliR

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    Okay guys, thanks alot! :D

    So here's what i've decided:
    => Will increase line-spacing
    => Will make the background green a bit more similar to the one used in the logo
    => Will add a bit of contrast with maybe Dark Grey. :)

    Will post an update. Please give me more suggestions if possible. Thanks! :D
     
    AliR, Mar 28, 2010 IP
  8. AliR

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    Update :)
     
    AliR, Mar 28, 2010 IP
  9. WordPressThemes

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    yeah, this is better the first one ! The button readmore should be darker !

     
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