Need A 'Catchy' Headline - Bit of a Wierd One

Discussion in 'Content Creation' started by Thumperhartley, Sep 14, 2007.

  1. #1
    Looking for a quick $5? I want ideas:confused:. I need an eye catching headline for a poster advertising that if you are caught committing any kind of anti social behaviour in a town centre that you will get barred from all the pubs for 6 months. This is for one of my other work hats which is a small local campaign and not big budget. I have ideas but I want to see if you guys can come up with anything better.

    All I want is It is purely the text for now as design will come later. Bear in mind that this will be mostly read by people under the influence of alcohol so should be obvious, hard hitting but legal:) In summary 'F**k about, you get Barred'

    I will take ideas by PM so nobody steals each others. I will run this over the weekend and close the thread Monday. The headline I like the most will receive payment via Paypal only.

    Good Luck content writers
     
    Thumperhartley, Sep 14, 2007 IP
  2. $tumbler

    $tumbler Banned

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    #2
    Is this headline only for 1 anti-social topic or various?
     
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  3. Thumperhartley

    Thumperhartley Peon

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    #3
    Sorry, just to clarify. antisocial in this context. Means drug taking, fighting, urinating in the street, usual Friday night stuff really. Just need to hit these idiots where it hurts by saying. Get caught doing this kind of thing and you will not get into any pubs in town, simple as that.
     
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    #4
    How about this line?
    "Shame on you, Shame on your Future.
    quit that habit"

    Dont need the money, just want to spread the awareness
     
    $tumbler, Sep 14, 2007 IP
  5. Thumperhartley

    Thumperhartley Peon

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    #5
    Thanks for the input Tumbler
     
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    #6
    Err mate its $tumbler :D
    love to help :)
     
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    neoloves? Active Member

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    #7
    Sounds nice.
     
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    KiHack Banned

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    #8
    Don't Make A Shy And Continue TO Get High
     
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    #9
    Well.. I've got loads but I've Pmed you 2. Good luck mate.
     
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  10. Thumperhartley

    Thumperhartley Peon

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    #10
    Thank you to all who have responded to this and PM'd me. There are some good ones so far - keep em coming. Me nd the Mrs will make the decision on Monday night.
     
    Thumperhartley, Sep 14, 2007 IP
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    #11
    Even pubs like humans, not savages. Improve or be barred !

    Just a wild creation. Hope you like it !
     
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    #12
    Want the pub? Leave the street :) Thanks
     
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    #13
    Here are a few ideas I came up with while I was typing this...

    1) In big letters with an arrow pointing to a smaller line of text "If you can't read this (Arrow) Maybe you've had to much".

    Not quite sure what the smaller line of text should be...

    2) "Drinking's not a crime, Vandalism is."

    3) "Think Jail's Bad?"

    I'll probably come up with some more in a bit...
     
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    Blogmaster Blood Type Dating Affiliate Manager

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    #14
    "Get straight or get lost!"
     
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    #15
    Thanks for all your replies. I have to keep changing my ideas for the design after reading some of these.
     
    Thumperhartley, Sep 15, 2007 IP
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    #16
    Thanks to all of you who replied to this thread and sent me a PM. It was a lot of fun reading though all your submissions. After careful deliberation, the winner is 'blueparukia', an entry via PM. Although I will not be using his/her phrase in it's entirety it sent me off on a train of thought leading to a potential design. So the grand sum of $5 is winging it's way to you once you send me your Paypal email. I will PM you also in case you miss this thread.

    Once again, thanks to all of you. I will be using DP for this type of thing again in the future.
     
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    #17
    Payment Sent (ID No.97P08793PL203183A ) to winner. This thread can now be closed
     
    Thumperhartley, Sep 18, 2007 IP