my youtube video

hi

I have posted a link here hope it works
if it does please tell me what you think and if i could improve on it to sell my site
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=OWBzeewIXHk

bret

 

i think its a good video but you should show more stuff other than just the windmill
maybe show what you'll need in pcs.
but its good.
the music is good to. i like it

 

I think you need to add more professional video with detail information in order to get customer for your product or service.

.SR

 

You need to make your video more interesting. Any static scene that stays for more than 8 second will definitely bore the viewer.

Anyway, your "how to" video just reminded me of my own, How to make a fake dildo video, http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=43Q_eDEhHP0

It's just for fun though.

 

I couldn't read half the text because things kept popping up over it.

 

i can make you a good video for a advert....
let me know wouldnt cost ya to much and it would look good

 

The video looks really great, I like the windmill, and the ebook that teaches you about it.

 

A single windmill is not enough
to be shown.
Add some stuffs on it.
the video moves terribly.
The text are too plain and simple
make some changes in the text.