My wife's first article for sale: How to suceed on your first date

Discussion in 'Copywriting' started by bangers, Aug 10, 2007.

  1. #1
    My wife was bored today and I suggested she have a try at writing some content. Anyway, after 3 hours (bless her) she crafted a great article titled "How to succeed on your first date" - (I think it was based on my great performance when we first met hahahaha :) )

    The article lists 11 tips on how to succeed on your first date, each tip is written beautifully and is so true.

    The article is 394 words long.

    Here is one tip from the list:

    "Balance talking and listening: pay attention to the amount of time you spend talking versus listening. If the scale is weighing in either direction, look to balance it out."

    You can buy this exclusive article for $15 and will not be re-sold or used.

    If you have more than 5 ITraders, I will offer a 100% refund if you are not happy with the article and you promise not to use it - That's how confident I am that you will be happy with it :)
     
    bangers, Aug 10, 2007 IP
  2. marcel

    marcel Well-Known Member

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    Interesting topic.

    I associate the word "suceed" with business though. IMHO
     
    marcel, Aug 10, 2007 IP
  3. cherry_yuya

    cherry_yuya Active Member

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    Try selling here to get more response.
     
    cherry_yuya, Aug 10, 2007 IP
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    mydeuter Well-Known Member

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    that is very noble of you ...good luck :)
     
    mydeuter, Aug 10, 2007 IP
  5. Aine11

    Aine11 Peon

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    well its better to post it in "Buy, Sell or Trade > Content" section...Good Luck :)
     
    Aine11, Aug 10, 2007 IP