my website - Please comment

Discussion in 'Reviews' started by afham07, Jan 10, 2008.

  1. #1
    hi guys,

    i am developing a website. This is not final version of it because i have not finish work on the content. you may view it here: http://jersibola.com/fyp/

    btw, in my opinion, it looks too simple. i do not know what should i add to make it more interesting.

    do you guys have any idea? :). tq.
     
    afham07, Jan 10, 2008 IP
  2. virtuamind

    virtuamind Peon

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    it's cool that it's in flash, but the buttons and fonts and everything is too simple.. really flat imo.
    it will be nice with better textures.
     
    virtuamind, Jan 10, 2008 IP
  3. maemae

    maemae Peon

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    #3
    I like the flash effects as well. I suggest adding some texture to. Looks great though you did a really nice job.
    Maemae
     
    maemae, Jan 10, 2008 IP
  4. Myr

    Myr Member

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    #4
    Flash is nice, but this is a little bit overkill if you ask me. Imagine people having to see this every time they go to your website. Once or twice is nice but after that it will get irritating.
     
    Myr, Jan 10, 2008 IP
  5. urber

    urber Active Member

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    #5
    I agreed with Myr, flash site is quite irritating after a few times loading. Part of the page with flash is ok but not all.
     
    urber, Jan 11, 2008 IP
  6. gitasha

    gitasha Peon

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    #6
    Site looks reddish, change the red colour as light pink or some light blue, red looks very horrible. The tile is nice and the text is pretty good. Only need changes on the red colour.
     
    gitasha, Jan 11, 2008 IP
  7. dhunmaari

    dhunmaari Active Member

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    #7
    You can use images to improve designs,use light colours i think web2.0 colours will be very nice for this.though designed in flash i cant see any animation out of it.If you don't include the animation,ther is no point of making site by using flash.
     
    dhunmaari, Jan 11, 2008 IP
  8. swedal

    swedal Notable Member

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    #8
    Some of the text is not very crisp and having an all flash main page will not help you with the search engines imo
     
    swedal, Jan 11, 2008 IP
  9. wwpimpin

    wwpimpin Guest

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    #9
    make a main page instead of the flash.
     
    wwpimpin, Jan 11, 2008 IP
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    I hate the color combination and the boxes moving around. It hates my eyes! Nice site though... :D
     
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  11. afham07

    afham07 Active Member

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    page edited .. please review again .. tq .
     
    afham07, Jan 12, 2008 IP
  12. itrush07

    itrush07 Well-Known Member

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    #12
    You're really on for something afham07, but just as what everybody was suggesting, try to work on your colors and don't forget to add some graphics...
     
    itrush07, Jan 12, 2008 IP