My Very First Website!

Discussion in 'Websites' started by Mrs.Crow, May 6, 2006.

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    I am so excited I got my very first website tonight.

    Could you please review it and let me know what you think?


    www.ArticleBrokers.com

    I appreciate it very much!

    Thank You

    Mrs Crow
     
    Mrs.Crow, May 6, 2006 IP
  2. AmyNelson

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    Site could not be found.
     
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  3. MediaHustler

    MediaHustler Well-Known Member

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    Not working for me.
     
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  4. on9now.com

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    Page cannot be display again!?
     
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  5. Mrs.Crow

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    Thank you very much for letting me know and at least trying. Trying to get this fixed.
    Thanks,
    Mrs. Crow
     
    Mrs.Crow, May 7, 2006 IP
  6. Deano

    Deano Sail away with me.

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    It's up now :)
    I find the background very distracting, red is a colour that catches your attention so it makes it hard for me to concentrate on your centered text.
    Also the background flickers when one scrolls down due to the white text.
     
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  7. Tyler Banfield

    Tyler Banfield Well-Known Member

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    I agree with Deano, I would scrap the red background.
     
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  8. AmyNelson

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    Yes the red and white contrast is really distracting from the articles themselves.
     
    AmyNelson, May 8, 2006 IP
  9. EASYDOMAIN4ALL

    EASYDOMAIN4ALL Well-Known Member

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    exactly...I think there is too much red outside of main content area...you might think about getting a light color..may be pure white and "Exclusive Articles!" written a grey shade...might look nice:)
     
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    I agree that changing it to blue , or sth like this
    You should create your Demo gallery to let your customer know how'bout the quality of article.
     
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  11. Mrs.Crow

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    Thank you all very much for critiquing my site and will se waht can be done about making it more friendly
    Mrs.Crow
     
    Mrs.Crow, May 8, 2006 IP
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    the sites cool mrs crow, i do agree about the red though, a little sore on the eyes, well done though :)
     
    richard design, May 8, 2006 IP
  13. ramakrishna p

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    Congratulations Mrs.Crow for hosting http://www.articlebrokers.com.
    The following few are my Observation and requests from you:

    (i) There should be a link to show sample articles written by ArticleBrokers.com.
    (ii) Replace the red background color with #999999 (please see attached jpeg image of ArticleBrokers header).
     

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    ramakrishna p, May 8, 2006 IP