My site is finished

Discussion in 'Websites' started by greenstar91, May 19, 2007.

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  1. dwalk104

    dwalk104 Peon

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    #21
    I noticed you have "Welcome to Breakthefirewall.com" as your H1 tag. You probably want to put a few keywords in there to help with SEO. an idea: "Welcome to Breakthefirewall.com a Free Proxy Service to Surf Anonymously."

    And your title tag is not being well utilized at all. Use more keywords there too.
     
    dwalk104, May 21, 2007 IP
  2. masquecompras

    masquecompras Active Member

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    #22
    Sorry but i don´t like.
    The coloer are to strong for me.

     
    masquecompras, May 22, 2007 IP
  3. Voltec

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    #23
    No idea why you put the line break after "By Using our free service" - what is does is break the line artificially instead of the letting the browser wrap it naturally. On my browser, I display 3 lines - with service being the only word on the 2nd line. You did the same thing in your Disclaimer (after the word "person(s)".

    I think the rest of the suggestions have been given enough to illustrate their validity... :)

    Matt
     
    Voltec, May 22, 2007 IP
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    #24
    The text is maybe too small and doesnt stand out enough
     
    jejjcop, May 23, 2007 IP
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