Hi, I'm looking for some input on a sales copy I wrote up. http://diets.myxboxbroke.com I'm fairly new to marketing, so any helpful comments are welcomed I'm wondering if I should add more stuff to the site such as an opt-in email form, some site articles, etc... Thanks, Redstar
Clean layout, the content is short and to the point, and you've also added a tool the user can interact with, looks nice. Good work. Also, I think since you're targeting both female and male persons, you should include a hot chick in that picture ;]
It's little hard to read the content. Indent (space at the edge) may solve the problem. Also, I suggest you to make headline the first thing people read. That makes huge difference in if visitors leave instantly or read the content.