My own poem(please give your valuable comments, so that i can improve myself)

The Earth's Sadness
I am earth
I saved all people
I was laughing
I was enjoying all the moments
I flowered the people with blossoms
I was saving the people from all natural calamities
But, now
My Child's have become my enemies
My friends have gone away from me
My face got spoiled
My beauty gets depleted
And now everyone are avoiding me
I am in sorrow
I am not cared
I am not loved
I am not recognized
Why should I live?
I am dying
I am dying
Dying
Missing you all.

 

very nice emotionally deep poem

 

Nice poem and straight upto the situation today

Inspired

 

fantastic poem, the current situation is explained well. friends please save our earth from global warming. very much impressed

 

An fantastic poem with good meaning. i think more awareness should be created on global warming and its issues.

 

Interesting structure. Though you might want to make it more complicated in it's meanings.

 

good poem with good message