My Newbie landing page "premature ejaculation.org" :P

Discussion in 'Reviews' started by godlikegreg, Jun 16, 2009.

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    hey guys this is my first attempt at a landing page, i chose this topic because it seemed no one else was touching it and it seems to have a good gravity.

    http://www.how-to-stop-premature-ejaculation.org

    i would like to know how the marketing is, can the page be changed to make it more appealing, any input would be great.
     
    godlikegreg, Jun 16, 2009 IP
  2. netdriver788

    netdriver788 Well-Known Member

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    Good effort in first attempt but need to work more in design part.Because the site now looks too simple and plain.
     
    netdriver788, Jun 17, 2009 IP
  3. m@rdoogle

    m@rdoogle Peon

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    Nice site but like netdriver said you need to work in design.

    Good luck with your project.
     
    m@rdoogle, Jun 17, 2009 IP
  4. youtubesolutions

    youtubesolutions Peon

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    Maybe some images (nothing dirty), and a different top banner. The design needs to be cleaned up a bit, there are plenty of free website templates available on the web.
     
    youtubesolutions, Jun 17, 2009 IP
  5. odienk

    odienk Peon

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    yea...some image would be nice, or may be a movie trailler of your product
     
    odienk, Jun 17, 2009 IP
  6. clickschile

    clickschile Peon

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    Maybe an image besides the text, but otherwise it looks good to me
     
    clickschile, Jun 17, 2009 IP
  7. lefted

    lefted Active Member

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    maybe a nice layout..?
     
    lefted, Jun 17, 2009 IP
  8. .black.white.

    .black.white. Guest

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    you need to change the design.
    looks too plain
    good luck!
     
    .black.white., Jun 19, 2009 IP
  9. 2advance

    2advance Well-Known Member

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    The site looks clear and simple, there is no attractive feature in that..
     
    2advance, Jun 20, 2009 IP